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pixon Junior Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 10oh. |
Just walking around Im lost but never found Then my soul slipped My body flipped Then I started to desent This fall that is presented Now I am falling Help I am calling Going down this hole Walls black as cole Stil falling Still calling There is no reply Shurely this is where i'll die It doesnt matter Life is all a bunch of chatter My last cry Good bye. ------------------ dead I am the rat. feast upon the cat, tender as the fur, dieing as you pur. -ROB ZOMBIE- |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Such feelings of aloneness portrayed. Just watch the spelling  ------------------ The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
I agree. This is a vivid portrayal. Well done pixon. |
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FreeByrd Member
since 1999-11-03
Posts 267 |
Hang on pix... Just thru you a rope. We need you here. Good Work -RS ------------------ |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
I feel your soul crying out in this piece. Very well done. michael |
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