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Red Rockets and Fancy Shinies
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Red Rockets and Fancy Shinies |
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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
they came today the men of red Men of mars they were from way up there we were all happy everyone smiling haveing a party shouting Rushing back and forward Daddy and mummy looked up to the sky And reached up Smiling All the street were out playing music watching Red rockets And Fancy Shinies dancing The skies burned for days As they went whoosh and zoom All around they went Until they stopped over me I was so happy i reached up To touch the magic light Like Santa and Tinkerbell together The light fell on me and the darkness came ------------------ Pride of place in the human race goes to one without a trace, of subtlety style ego or grace for this position, I wish to say, i would be proud as i am greater than any other face in the crowd |
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Shorty Du Opp Junior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 11West Allis, WI, USA |
Your poem is great. It has left me with a great feeling inside me , that I can't quite explain. |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
I had a completly opposite reaction...i felt a feeling of terror like you were so happy to touch those things but they suddenly turned against you..scary!! sorry if this is a wierd way of looking at it!! ------------------ "If you love something let it go...if it comes back to you it is yours...if it doesnt then it never was" |
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