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ThUnDeRkYsS
Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727
Wisconsin

0 posted 1999-11-26 01:49 AM


Helpless
hopeless
trying hard
hurting
crying
deal my card

Feeling
showing
cant get through
honest
truthful
just for you

Thinking
seeing
may never be
wonder
hope
when will I see

Asking
wanting
still just trying
needing
growing
slowly dying.

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Life is what you make of it... Not what you let it be

© Copyright 1999 B.J.Howe - All Rights Reserved
Stevia
Junior Member
since 1999-11-25
Posts 28

1 posted 1999-11-26 06:04 AM


It was beautiful, made me cry.
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
2 posted 1999-11-26 05:32 PM


I wrote something similar to this a few weeks ago, so I fully understand those feelings. Well done

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The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)



ThUnDeRkYsS
Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727
Wisconsin
3 posted 1999-11-26 07:10 PM


Stevia... Thank you.
Isis... Thank you These are hard feelings to deal with... but learn oh so much about yourself.

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Life is what you make of it... Not what you let it be

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
4 posted 1999-11-26 10:22 PM


The journey of learning is frought with pain, but if we don't follow it through to end we have nothing to gain

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The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)



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