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Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

0 posted 1999-11-25 11:47 PM



Try as I might,
The feelings of doubt resurface,
They enfold me yet again,
Will my heart never know true peace?

Mystical chakra gripped in hand,
Can only save me from others,
Nothing can save me from myself,
Why do I even bother?

Rich, sullen and slow,
Like a fat monster,
Come to sit by me,
There's not much more that can be done.

From what graveyard,
Did the darkness crawl?
What primeval ooze?
Makes no sense at all.

Is my life just a parade or rehearsal,
In some bigger beings childish fun?
He forever keeps me dangling,
Often crushing everyone.

Sadness and fear outside,
Screams and darkness inside,
The dungeon master with eyes so dark,
Still has hold of me.....


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The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)



© Copyright 1999 Isis - All Rights Reserved
Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850
In the space between moments
1 posted 1999-11-26 01:07 AM


ooooh, powerful...excellent work!

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*Krista Knutson*

"If my heart had wings, I would fly to you and lie beside you as you dream....." ~Faith Hill: If My Heart Had Wings~



Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
2 posted 1999-11-26 05:30 PM


Thanks Alwye

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The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)



JOY 14
Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA
3 posted 1999-11-28 11:13 AM


The last lines....I love....
Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
4 posted 1999-11-29 04:11 AM


Hard to escape those eyes, Isis. I know.

michael

JennyLee
Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
5 posted 1999-11-30 12:50 PM


Excellent Isis
loved all your great lines


Jenny

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Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.



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