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ONLY If Its True. |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin 
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This "way" I feel I cannot show it's clear to me right now my heart you steal it's free to know but yet "scares" you somehow How did this happen it came so quiet so swift to 'ortake me my "stops" to flatten my pace to riot heart says "just look and see" I can now say I was not ready or expecting this it wants to stay it's there quite steady what should I do with this? You have to know you surely see I cannot hide it all I sometimes show a bit more free I just cant tell you all When you feel ready to hear the rest please come and I will tell but I'll hold steady and do my best to not "trip" and say I "fell" I want to know if you could feel the same way that I do but please dont show unless it's real... ...dont want unless "it's" true. ------------------ Life is what you make of it... Not what you let it be [This message has been edited by ThUnDeRkYsS (edited 11-26-1999).] |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
ThUnDeRkYsS...I like the flow in this...... enjoyed it.  Stanza five said it all for me Jenny [This message has been edited by JennyLee (edited 11-25-1999).] |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
And the question behind it..beautifully done ------------------ The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
Thank you so much both of you... Your comments mean a great deal to me  ------------------ Life is what you make of it... Not what you let it be |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Just thinking... TK if you need to talk you know to email me don't you?? ------------------ The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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