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summer
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since 1999-11-23
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long beach .ca.usa

0 posted 1999-11-25 01:32 AM


Have you noticed the older you get the quicker time passes.6 years to a child would sound like eternity, and for some of us aswell.My question to you is, how long is 6 years.Year 1-You've given life to another being.Then joyously said "I do". Year 2-Isnt exactly the same.There's new questions daily with poor and undecisive answers.Year 3-Brings another new life into the picture, was this the answer to year 2 "hardly". Year 4-Destruction has paid you a visit and your reallity has become unrealistic to you.Year 5-Has brought you a kind of emptiness you had no clue existed. You can even smell death at your weakest moments.But wait hold on just a little longer.Is that a light I see at the end of this torturious tunnel.I must be nearig the end of Year 6.Do yourself a favor and dont let time fool you it holds no regards for anyone.
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
1 posted 1999-11-25 01:55 AM


Indeed, summer. Time is a leech on the soul. You'll never convince me that nights alone don't pass twice as slow as nights with arms around you...all the while, Time is snickering off in the corner somewhere.

hehe...don't mind me, just venting a little. Good work, I totally agree with you.

michael

Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
2 posted 1999-11-25 05:20 PM


Indeed time always marches on and eventually you find it's marching over you

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The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)



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