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Walter Poe
Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787


0 posted 1999-11-24 12:00 PM


I slipped down
Into a well
Slipping down
into hell

Demon east
Demon west
All Eating
Souls unrest

I leave myself
and enter you
that fateful night
Mornings new

Sun rise
From silver moon
On the beach
in the dunes

On the night
I left you
dyeing in the
mornings dew

I awake each
Morning in my hell
This is just
a different cell.


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Pride of place in the human race goes to one without a trace,
of subtlety style ego or grace for this position, I wish to say, i would be proud as i am greater than any other face in the crowd

© Copyright 1999 Paul Weatherstone - All Rights Reserved
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 1999-11-24 06:19 PM


Loved the last stanza!!! Dismally dark my friend

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The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)



Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
2 posted 1999-11-24 07:32 PM


great piece, Walter...i agree with Isis, the last stanza rocks.

michael

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