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summer
Member
since 1999-11-23
Posts 80
long beach .ca.usa

0 posted 1999-11-24 12:40 PM


You look at me so sincere waiting for that right moment to pounce and devour me.All you see is flesh,something we all have,but there is something different somthing unique withen this package. I am like no other woman .All I want to do is love you and its in my nature to take care of you.Why do you fight me so. Only I can give you a child. Only I can give you a peice of that love your mother gave you when you were a boy. If you would just yeild for one moment and stop trying to conquer me. I was created for you from the beginning of time,and if you let me i would submit to you. I am a being just like you and can be used for so many things other than satisfying your need to be inside of me.
© Copyright 1999 summer - All Rights Reserved
candace
Junior Member
since 1999-09-05
Posts 14
los angeles, california
1 posted 1999-11-24 01:15 AM


very strong powerful emotions colored by darkness of a sweet unconditional love...liked it...
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
2 posted 1999-11-24 06:18 PM


Liked this a lot, you go girl!!!

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The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)



Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
3 posted 1999-11-24 07:30 PM


Ouch....very well done, summer.

michael

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