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Isis
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since 1999-09-06
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Sunny Queensland

0 posted 1999-11-23 07:59 PM


I wonder if they know just what they did to me,
I wonder if they think about the pain they left me with,
I wonder if they even have it in their souls,
The power to forgive.

I forgive them their mistakes,
Their selfishness or crime,
But still these thoughts do niggle,
And perhaps will for all time.

I still miss some of them,
Long to spend time with them again,
But sometimes you can't go back,
Some things do come to an end.

I will never forget them,
They'll always be in my heart,
Such special relationships,
I know were doomed from the start.

I wonder if they know,
Sometimes I'm still hurting,
Still loving from afar,
That they were worth my loving?



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The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)



© Copyright 1999 Isis - All Rights Reserved
starboards
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since 1999-10-14
Posts 467
longwood, florida
1 posted 1999-11-23 08:24 PM


This poem somehow reminds me of a bruised heart that has been broken almost to the point of utter numbness...i like the idea! keep writing because i'm always willing to read it!

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"If you love something let it go...if it comes back to you it is yours...if it doesnt then it never was"

Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
2 posted 1999-11-23 08:36 PM


Thanks Starboards That I can promise!!




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The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)



BlOoD TiEs
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since 1999-10-02
Posts 30
New York City
3 posted 1999-11-23 08:56 PM


another good one
keep up the good work

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Dont bet on fast horses, bet on slow rabits.

Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
4 posted 1999-11-23 10:51 PM


Thanks BT

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The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)



JennyLee
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since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
5 posted 1999-11-24 08:40 AM


Loving is so short...forgetting is so long.

Well Met

jenny

FreeByrd
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since 1999-11-03
Posts 267

6 posted 1999-11-24 09:53 AM


Tried going back before, it's never worked for me.

Terrific piece.

-RS

Sven
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7 posted 1999-11-24 01:23 PM


I have to agree with Jenny. . . the wounds can last forever. . .

Beautiful words. . .

Sven

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
8 posted 1999-11-24 06:02 PM


Thanks one and all

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The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)



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