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eegood
Junior Member
since 1999-11-16
Posts 41
Chicago,IL

0 posted 1999-11-23 05:11 PM


32 and I'm out of tears,
Shed for love lost thru the years.
Is fear itself the worst of fears?
I think not. Love lost, it sears.

My mind is numb,
My mouth is dumb,
No words will come,
My love is done.

Again I lose.
I tried to chose,
not knowing whose,
were truthful clues.

another empty stare,
For "Love" means beware.
It's just a hoax, not really there,
There's no answer for my prayer.

© Copyright 1999 eegood - All Rights Reserved
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 1999-11-23 05:22 PM


So sad Eegood It is out there, we just have to find it is all.

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The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)



Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
2 posted 1999-11-23 07:24 PM


Don't give up hope yet, I was 32 when I found the love of my life...but then, I had stopped looking too.


Michael

starboards
Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467
longwood, florida
3 posted 1999-11-23 07:29 PM


I know the feeling, if u get hurt too many times you stop feeling, stop looking, and eventually stop loving. This shouldnt happen to anyone, especially you eegood, i feel for you though, because you poem speaks great things! keep em coming...

danni
Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688
wisconsin
4 posted 1999-11-24 01:20 AM


Your poem speaks such truths.
I am only 21 and there are alot of times I feel the same. But hope still gets the better of me.

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