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lostboy Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 275New Hampshire, USA |
When will it end When will it begin Release me, I finally give in Intuition, hard to explain My thinking patterns like a hurricane Ten to one I'm going to die Lost my instinct to survive 800 number That's a laugh One more statistic on another graph A word in memory, Oh, how sincere Do me a favor, say I wasn't here Twisted matter Tears of pain Awoke and wonder why I'm not the same Wall to wall closing in Don't have the strength to try again ps just a poem, not my state of mind!! |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
I like this one!!! Your lucky this isnt ur emotional state! keep um coming! ashley ------------------ "If you love something let it go...if it comes back to you it is yours...if it doesnt then it never was" |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
good poem, lostboy. "Another statistic", that just about sums it up, doesn't it. Michael |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Felt the hoplessness in this piece. Enjoyed..... ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! |
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lostboy Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 275New Hampshire, USA |
ashley, michael and pepper, thank you. so glad you caught the feel of this one. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Well done! Glad you aren't feeling that way. Where do you go and what do you do if you do feel that way? Sad... ------------------ The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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