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For_Never
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since 1999-10-27
Posts 125
Cincinnati, oh, United States of America

0 posted 1999-11-22 07:31 PM


He sits upon his throne so high..
so aloof to where or why,
he didn't notice when he began to lose..
The sacrificail flock outside,
once oure, and full of light,
sprouted fangs, and bled children on the lawn

and so horribly shown..
It's assumed that somehow...
light just changes to shadow..
but as we all know..
as in every war...
supplies determine the victor..

The darkness eddies in endless dances..
forth from where light once glanced, yet..
it seems no content to reside..
from forever it draws its strength..
and light from the King..who sits upon..
upon a dream so high..

come....the darkness doth draw nigh...

Edward A. Beerman
11-22-99


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For a fateful night of passion, since my heart needs one last vent, I believe I am willing to pay that black widows rent...

[This message has been edited by For_Never (edited 11-22-1999).]

© Copyright 1999 Edward A. Beerman - All Rights Reserved
starboards
Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467
longwood, florida
1 posted 1999-11-22 08:57 PM


different, definatly different, i like though...

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"If you love something let it go...if it comes back to you it is yours...if it doesnt then it never was"

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
2 posted 1999-11-22 08:57 PM


Strong words and feelings there my friend.
Missed you in here you know? Hope to catch up with you on icq ..




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The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)



Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
3 posted 1999-11-23 02:04 AM


Wow...wonderful work, Ed. Loved the ending, as well as the first two lines, they said a mouthful. Good to see you here, again, I've missed ya.

michael

JennyLee
Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
4 posted 1999-11-23 06:37 AM


Brava

Jenny

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