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FreeByrd Member
since 1999-11-03
Posts 267 |
Retraced your steps to look I was taken by surprise Time since I have felt like this Your gaze it entered mine Compliments they stirred Feral nature from within Drawn to touch instinctively Forbidden Reckless intensity Controlled restraint Temporal ecstasy Imagination designs the affair Unadorned, we embrace Dermal of contrasting hue Bodies easily traced Feeling no longer illusory Thoughts become tactile We join In my minds eye -RS ------------------ |
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Deep Blue Me Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396By a big lake |
Out of the park, Byrd! Thoughts become tactile... Forbidden... This is magic, my friend. DB |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Aaaaaaah Forbidden Love, is there better?  Magic my friend.. My comments mirror DB's don't they ?  ------------------ The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there ISto celebrate. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Great poem, FreeByrd. "Imagination designs the affair"...loved it. Michael |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Feral nature from within.... The last verse is also exquisite Jenny MORE PLEASE  ------------------ Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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