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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
the angels are coming Release me from you Allow me to fly free My bond to you is to strong Your love holds me Traps me here in frailty just go alone away my love my heart longs to stay But i must just fly away The angels sing so sweet on the clouds pink and sweet Just forget love my love For Now I go lest my heart forget ------------------ Pride of place in the human race goes to one without a trace, of subtlety style ego or grace for this position, I wish to say, i would be proud as i am greater than any other face in the crowd |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
I feel ur emotions in ur words! I can totally relate to this one! Keep em coming! ------------------ "If you love something let it go...if it comes back to you it is yours...if it doesnt then it never was" |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Traps me here in frailty...ah I have felt this way Mr. Poe....many a time.  Jenny ------------------ Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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Deep Blue Me Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396By a big lake |
Deep Sentiment, Walter. Deeply emotional for me... DB |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Alot beneath the surface on this one, Walter. Good poem. Michael |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
I too love the depth to your thinking in this one Walter! And it's my belief the heart never forgets, dead or alive  ------------------ The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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