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danni
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since 1999-11-20
Posts 688
wisconsin

0 posted 1999-11-21 07:22 PM


I am young, but I am old
I am strong, but I am weak
What can I say, I am me
A walking hypocrisy
I am willing, but untrusting
I am loving, but I hate
What can I say, I am me
A walking hypocrisy
I am guilty for my innocense
I find solace in my pain
What can I say, I am me
A walking hypocrisy
I am happy in my anger
I am gentle with my rage
I hope you can accept me
For the way that I may be
All I have to give you
Is simply only me


© Copyright 1999 Dannielle - All Rights Reserved
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 1999-11-21 08:19 PM


Well me sounds pretty good to me!!
Very smart poem here

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The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there is to celebrate.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)



danni
Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688
wisconsin
2 posted 1999-11-21 09:00 PM


Thank you for the compliment. Those feelings aren't so bad if you know how to direct them I suppose.
Deep Blue Me
Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396
By a big lake
3 posted 1999-11-22 05:38 PM


Me sounds "SASSY"
Good work

DB

Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
4 posted 1999-11-22 08:06 PM


Awesome poem, danni. I can relate well to most of this...very well done.


Michael

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