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starboards
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since 1999-10-14
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longwood, florida

0 posted 1999-11-21 06:31 PM




Searching



I can still feel your skin

against my own

as you whisper that you love me




I turn to say it back

but you're not there

you were never there




I cry out in pain

as I search for you

you and that feeling




The feeling that I lack

and miss from you

I guess I will continue to search.



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"If you love something let it go...if it comes back to you it is yours...if it doesnt then it never was"

© Copyright 1999 Ashley Keenan - All Rights Reserved
Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 1999-11-21 06:39 PM


Don't search for him, continue and search for someone better and happiness

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The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there is to celebrate.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)



starboards
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since 1999-10-14
Posts 467
longwood, florida
2 posted 1999-11-21 06:43 PM


I am searching for someone better, but I wrote this a couple of days after we broke up



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"If you love something let it go...if it comes back to you it is yours...if it doesnt then it never was"

Deverone
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 136
San Antonio, Tx, USA
3 posted 1999-11-22 01:06 AM


Good for you to search for someone who is better....its a hard thing to do, but it can be done....Be strong and have courage.

Nice work

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Deverone

"We are cups, constantly and quietly being filled. The trick is, knowing how to tip ourselves over and let the beautiful stuff out".

----Ray Bradbury---



Deep Blue Me
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since 1999-11-04
Posts 396
By a big lake
4 posted 1999-11-22 06:06 PM


I turn to say it back
but you're not there
you were never there...

Very powerful for me.

DB

Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
5 posted 1999-11-22 06:26 PM


I realise than hon, keep searching and someday soon you will be surrounded by magic again........




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The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there ISto celebrate.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


starboards
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since 1999-10-14
Posts 467
longwood, florida
6 posted 1999-11-22 08:51 PM


Thanks guys for your comments, especially Isis who has been there for me all along! Thanks again!

ashley

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"If you love something let it go...if it comes back to you it is yours...if it doesnt then it never was"

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