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starboards
Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467
longwood, florida

0 posted 1999-11-21 06:13 PM


To see blood
To stop pain
To cut skin
To end rain
To cry no more
To feel nothing
To turn cold
To hope death

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"If you love something let it go...if it comes back to you it is yours...if it doesnt then it never was"

© Copyright 1999 Ashley Keenan - All Rights Reserved
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 1999-11-21 06:21 PM


I feel your pain, but may I add death is never an answer!! Hey if you need to talk please email me anytime??

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The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there is to celebrate.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)



Bright Melody
Junior Member
since 1999-11-06
Posts 37
O'Fallon Illinois
2 posted 1999-11-21 07:15 PM


I echo Isis. If you ever need to talk. Don't hesitate to email me.

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Never frown because you never know who is falling in love with your smile.

Walter Poe
Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787

3 posted 1999-11-22 09:51 AM


Is poetry reality
Is it your reality
Is it another reality
Your mind or body
Can you believe in its power
or is it all for naught

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Pride of place in the human race goes to one without a trace,
of subtlety style ego or grace for this position, I wish to say, i would be proud as i am greater than any other face in the crowd

Deep Blue Me
Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396
By a big lake
4 posted 1999-11-22 01:56 PM


"To" write very well...

Great stuff, Star

DB

starboards
Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467
longwood, florida
5 posted 1999-11-22 09:06 PM


Thanks guys! I've really been struggling to remain sane through really tought times and u guys are the only ones that will listen too me, thanks again guys!

ashley

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"If you love something let it go...if it comes back to you it is yours...if it doesnt then it never was"

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