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starboards
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since 1999-10-14
Posts 467
longwood, florida

0 posted 1999-11-21 06:08 PM


She wiped her eyes,
and stared into the November Sky,
Looking towards the clouds,
for a reason why.

But the clouds in the sky,
were no help to her,
So she turned to you,
for the cure.

A cure to numb,
the pain she feels,
But you wouldn't help her,
now she can't deal.

She found a cure,
to help her forget,
She had no other way out,
to her it was the best yet.

As she drew it near,
she felt the memories fading quicker,
With the coldness on her skin,
she pulled the trigger.

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"If you love something let it go...if it comes back to you it is yours...if it doesnt then it never was"


[This message has been edited by starboards (edited 11-22-1999).]

© Copyright 1999 Ashley Keenan - All Rights Reserved
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 1999-11-21 06:10 PM


I quite liked this poem Starboards, and welcome to Dark Passions Hope to see more of your stuff here

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The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there is to celebrate.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)



Deep Blue Me
Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396
By a big lake
2 posted 1999-11-22 05:04 PM


Visual scariness.

DB

Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
3 posted 1999-11-22 07:53 PM


Great poem, Starboards.

michael

FreeByrd
Member
since 1999-11-03
Posts 267

4 posted 1999-11-23 10:48 AM


she pulled the trigger.

on her pen.

Nice work

-RS

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