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pixon
Junior Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 10
oh.

0 posted 1999-11-21 03:18 AM


Does love exist
Does it come and go in a mist
I truely dont know
The world works so cruely
Love comes and goes
It hurts as it flows
Love is just a part of life
Jst the tip of the knife
It can be nice
But it you trust it youve putting your
emotions on rolling dice
It completes you for a while
But when your throw you have no reson to
smile
It depresses you
Suicide coresses your mind
But eventuly you'll find
It will come again, the mist
That youve missed
It goes on like this
On and off bliss.

© Copyright 1999 pixon - All Rights Reserved
starboards
Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467
longwood, florida
1 posted 1999-11-21 07:24 PM


exactly correct, pixon GREAT JOB!

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"If you love something let it go...if it comes back to you it is yours...if it doesnt then it never was"

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
2 posted 1999-11-21 08:20 PM


Excellent job here

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The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there is to celebrate.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)



suicidal dreams
Member
since 1999-09-28
Posts 343
Toledo Ohio USA
3 posted 1999-11-21 08:51 PM


Alls Ive gotta say is love does exist
and please think not of suicide

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life is short kill quick

Deep Blue Me
Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396
By a big lake
4 posted 1999-11-22 05:35 PM


I'm with Tom.
It's rare but it's there.

DB

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