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pixon Junior Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 10oh. |
What is wrong with those eyes I wonder They fought but founderd I know those eyes are dead emotions Knowledge of failed love potions. It makes you wonder again How much pain did it take To kill those beutiful eyes Was it just to many lies Was it those black blue pruses Did the abuser know what else they could do Could those eyes be brought back to life Could they even be thought to be happy again I dont know But I hope so |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
You can tell a lot by a person's eyes, I've always thought. Your descriptions are good! I like the, "How much pain did it take To kill those beautiful eyes." |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Eyes - the window to the soul. I liked this a lot Pixon, and welcome to passions  ------------------ Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing... ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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suicidal dreams Member
since 1999-09-28
Posts 343Toledo Ohio USA |
I sure hope you post more chelsie your pretty damn good and BTW sorry about the mall and all ------------------ life is short kill quick |
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Deep Blue Me Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396By a big lake |
How much pain did it take?...... How much indeed... DB |
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