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pixon
Junior Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 10
oh.

0 posted 1999-11-21 02:11 AM


My rage cannot be restricted to a cage.
Its to big and powerful, In a respect
wonderfull.
Everyday it grows,man does this blow.
Makes me violent,puts me in my own
convinment.
Makes me dead, at least in my head.
I can never get rid of it,It is a red hot
fever.
I cant stop its growth, the growth of the
rage consumes me.
My rage controls me, takes me on long
lonely strolles.
I am starting to learn of this rage, it
likes to be free not caged like me.
We are more a like than I thought, how can
this be.
This isnt so bad, this is were my sad goes.
Sadness turns to rage,rage turns to power,power is like a spiked furn, beutiful but painful to touch,

© Copyright 1999 pixon - All Rights Reserved
Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
1 posted 1999-11-21 05:35 AM


Your pain is eveident in this one, Pixon. Good poem. Welcome to Dark Forum.

Michael

suicidal dreams
Member
since 1999-09-28
Posts 343
Toledo Ohio USA
2 posted 1999-11-21 09:56 PM


Wow man this was great know the feeling

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life is short kill quick

JennyLee
Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
3 posted 1999-11-21 10:00 PM


Makes me dead, at least in my head.

Wow is all I can say. Pain is a bitch

Jenny Lee

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Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.



Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
4 posted 1999-11-21 10:06 PM


Now you got all the RAGE out hope you feel better for it!!

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The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there is to celebrate.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)



Deep Blue Me
Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396
By a big lake
5 posted 1999-11-22 05:40 PM


The rage never leaves completely. Controlling and directing it is key.

DB

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