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mojar Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 169granbury, texas, usa |
time awaits as the darkness approaches, waiting for the moment that we can be together. my heart beats stronger with each beat, in anticipation of when we kiss. the taste of your lips is indelible on my mind, i want to feel them as they do battle with mine. to be able to gently kiss the softness at the back of your neck, and to nibble the lobes of your ears, sending you into another world. i want to stroke the entire length of your body, as my eyes engorge themselves with your beauty. my eyes burn with the picture of the union that is inevitalble, heat and passion wrestle in competition to see who will be the victor. tangled sheets and the aroma of love in the air, smells that permeate the very inner core. as my seed is laid and my longing sated, i awake to find that it was only a dream. me. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Are we in Adult or Dark????  I like this a lot, well done, but I am not sure whether it is better in Adults or not???Confusion reigning...... ------------------ Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing... ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Yeah, this is a very good poem, mojar, although very sensual, kinda walking the borders on this one. Beats the hell out of any dream I've had of late though. Michael |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Well Mo, you did it again! Sensuality beats the **ll out of disdain. Jenny Lee ------------------ Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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mojar Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 169granbury, texas, usa |
my sincere apologies for being so close to the edge, this was dark passion and not meant to be anything else. but i hope you felt the mind at work. thanks, mo. |
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Deep Blue Me Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396By a big lake |
Mo, Time to change the sheets, huh?!?! LOL! Nice walk on the sun. This is hot. DB |
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