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suicidal dreams
Member
since 1999-09-28
Posts 343
Toledo Ohio USA

0 posted 1999-11-19 10:12 PM


You slowly twist the knife
In my back as the poisin
seeps through my veins into
my head making me in a neurotic
fashion comfortable as you end
this life before you.

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life is short kill quick

© Copyright 1999 Tom - All Rights Reserved
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 1999-11-19 10:30 PM


You got me here on this one, it's hard to follow?????????

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Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


suicidal dreams
Member
since 1999-09-28
Posts 343
Toledo Ohio USA
2 posted 1999-11-19 10:34 PM


Thats what I was going for with this one
need me to explain e-mail me
but if you think ya understand e-mail anyway

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life is short kill quick

JennyLee
Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
3 posted 1999-11-20 02:58 PM


Tom.....HI....
I like The Knife very much
Later Gator

Jenny

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Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.


Deep Blue Me
Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396
By a big lake
4 posted 1999-11-22 04:46 PM


Nice "twist" to this one.

DB

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Motel, money, murder, madness.
Let's change the mood from glad to sadness...
===MOJO===

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