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What behind those eyes?
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What behind those eyes? |
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eegood Junior Member
since 1999-11-16
Posts 41Chicago,IL |
You look away-that smile dies You're so confused- I hear your cries. You try to explain- you try to believe You know what to do- you try to leave Every word you say- strangles my heart I try not to break- not to fall apart. I just want to grab you- and make you see This heart you own- inside of me. Just turn around- as happiness dies Show me the Heart..behind those eyes. I want to see I need to know The way it looks- before you go. The words you say- conflict with the beat I look through your eyes- so, please don't go Your killing me- but I'll try not to let it show. I want to sleep- inside your soul You make me complete- you make me whole. The beautiful rose- once round to bloom Now shedding it's petals- on tops of Love's tomb. I sit in the dark- with so many "why's" Just show me the Heart...behind those eyes. Let me see- that dream we shared Comfort me I'm torn and scared. I feel your tears- it's sharting to rain I lose myself- through all the pain. I'm begging for you- just do this for me Walk up to a mirror- so you can see. Is anything left?- Is something alive? Left there to struggle- while you take five? Look deep inside- you know it's there Under the smile- you use to wear. Listen real close- to love that cries... Listen to the Heart ...behind those eyes. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Beautiful imagery and words!!! This one is something special  ------------------ Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing... ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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mojar Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 169granbury, texas, usa |
you have expressed a lot of my own feelings with this, it strikes me to the core. if i could only see behind those eyes. |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Just show me the heart....behind those eyes. Lovely, Jenny ------------------ Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Depp and thought provoking. Wonderfully dark, eegood. Michael |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
Wow!! I really liked how you linked words together and spoke my heart! good job! ------------------ "If you love something let it go...if it comes back to you it is yours...if it doesnt then it never was" |
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Deverone Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 136San Antonio, Tx, USA |
WOW....you have reached into my thoughts and feelings and have made them visualize with pen and paper. Very good poem!! ------------------ Deverone "We are cups, constantly and quietly being filled. The trick is, knowing how to tip ourselves over and let the beautiful stuff out". ----Ray Bradbury--- |
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Deep Blue Me Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396By a big lake |
Magical and musical... Have you ever thought about this as lyrics? I can almost hear it now! DB |
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