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Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

0 posted 1999-11-19 05:37 PM



Am I am so childish to want my best,
To do my best in everything I do,
Am I so childish to believe so strongly,
The secrets of life are within you.

Am I so childish to want a magical Christmas,
For my little one this year,
To make it truly wonderful for him,
So his Xmas memories are filled with cheer.

Am I so childish cos I want to experience life,
Learn new things, see new places,
To see I have touched others,
When I glance at their smiling faces.

I don't liken it to childishness,
I think of myself as a warrior,
Fighting for love, peace and truth in my world,
My world a little less sorrier.

Is that wrong?
All that I believe?
Don't want a life,
Where I just sit and grieve...

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Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


© Copyright 1999 Isis - All Rights Reserved
FreeByrd
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since 1999-11-03
Posts 267

1 posted 1999-11-19 06:24 PM


Verse 2 should have all your attention.

Before he has too learn about the pain that brought about the others. Some things need not be known.

Best wishes for a Merry Christmas

For you and the little one.

-RS

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Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
2 posted 1999-11-19 10:04 PM


Thanks FreeByrd

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Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


Deep Blue Me
Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396
By a big lake
3 posted 1999-11-22 04:40 PM


Not childish, my dear, childlike. And let us never lose that ability completely. It would be the end of us all.

DB

starboards
Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467
longwood, florida
4 posted 1999-11-22 09:01 PM


When are you gonna stop coming w/these great poems, Isis?? I cant keep up! Great job, as always!

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"If you love something let it go...if it comes back to you it is yours...if it doesnt then it never was"

Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
5 posted 1999-11-22 11:00 PM


Why thankyou Starboards

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The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)



Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
6 posted 1999-11-22 11:18 PM



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