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mojar
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since 1999-11-09
Posts 169
granbury, texas, usa

0 posted 1999-11-19 01:16 PM


the purple haze of the days last light,
followed by the velvety night.
brings me to the thought of you,
looking into your eyes of blue.
if your eyes could speak, what would they say,
but tomorrow is yet another day.
the sparkle is ever present there,
floating all around the air.
within your eyes a song is near,
held back by a lonesome tear.
singers and poets emote mournful cries,
for the inspiration you hold in your eyes.
an angel dances within your sight,
as the power of love escapes the night.
the morning breaks with the freshness of dew,
that was shed from the tears of your eyes so blue.

me.

© Copyright 1999 mojar - All Rights Reserved
JennyLee
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since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
1 posted 1999-11-19 02:09 PM


Blue eyes have a special place in my heart!

Loved this very much

Jenny

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Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.


Tammy
Member
since 1999-09-09
Posts 90

2 posted 1999-11-19 04:27 PM




Mo,
This is truly captivating....
T.

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
3 posted 1999-11-19 05:18 PM


Captivating indeed, had me wanting more

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Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
4 posted 1999-11-21 05:06 AM


An essance of melancholy surround this piece, mojar, well done.


Michael

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