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The Way I See You... |
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Spyder New Member
since 1999-11-19
Posts 9 |
It was as if you came out of nowhere How exactly did we meet You became my world I want to make you happy I'd give up my world for you Give my life to save yours You're the most important thing to me You are my inspiration My life I see you as an angel Watching over me Over my life Making sure I'm always okay You're more than you think you are... You're beautiful. [This message has been edited by Spyder (edited 11-19-1999).] |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
The feelings of how deeply you love her comes through very clear in this piece Spyder.... Very nice indeed.... ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Welcome Spyder!! Totally captivating  Jenny Lee  ------------------ Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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mojar Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 169granbury, texas, usa |
i can relate to what you have to say. |
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Deep Blue Me Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396By a big lake |
Hey, I've got one of those too! Nice words. DB |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
Wow! This brought a smile to my depressed face...great job! I especially liked the part when you said: Over my life Making sure I'm always okay |
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