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Deep Blue Me Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396By a big lake |
She loves and cares and gives to all And receives so little in return Her gifts drop away like bright leaves in fall Helping others is her concern Her talent is obvious, 'tis so true Much less appreciation she knows Her words color us with a visionary hue And in them ancient wisdom glows Mortal flesh often fails her But her native spirit is strong Intellect still hungers And her soul goes forever on Her mind is an elemental frieze And in earthlore oft sups Her brave heart waves in slightest breeze Like endless golden buttercups If she was to leave us one day And we were left to mourn I'll not regret, for I will say I love you, Goddess Earthborn. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
This is sooooooooooo beautiful DB. It really moved me..  ------------------ Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing... ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Yes I agree....this is very beautiful Deep Blue ME ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Awesome, Awesome piece D.B., this one rocks! Michael |
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Tammy Member
since 1999-09-09
Posts 90 |
DB, This piece sound like you are describing a very good friend of mine.... I really like this one alot T. |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
David...I cannot speak....I have no words. No such esteem can be equaled. Jenny Lee  ------------------ Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
PS...Tammy is very preceptive isn't she? |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
David, this one is really beautiful. Well done. ------------------ Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices. |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
This is very very beautiful...I love it. ------------------ *Krista Knutson* "If my heart had wings, I would fly to you and lie beside you as you dream....." ~Faith Hill: If My Heart Had Wings~ |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
You never answered my question hon  ------------------ The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there is to celebrate. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Deep Blue Me Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396By a big lake |
I am enraptured with the responses to this meager attempt to describe my muse, especially if it brings attention to the one for whom it was written. A jewel as a friend and poet. DB |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
I keep coming back to read this, I love it, it moves me. So I'm gonna print it out!! To me at least, it's magical...  ------------------ The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there is to celebrate. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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