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Deverone
Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 136
San Antonio, Tx, USA

0 posted 1999-11-18 01:45 AM


This child is standing alone;

Heart walked away with.

No thought given, no emotion taken, no advice handed out, no explanation spoken.

Abandoned to fend for one's self.
Unwanted and thrown away; without care.

Tormented by hate,
pain,
& lonliness.
Never trusting,...


This child stands alone.


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Deverone

"We are cups, constantly and quietly being filled. The trick is, knowing how to tip ourselves over and let the beautiful stuff out".

----Ray Bradbury---



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Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 1999-11-18 06:04 AM


I see what you mean about the same brain cells Deverone! So nice to find one of your own thinking Poor child, wish I could hug her or him..

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Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


Deep Blue Me
Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396
By a big lake
2 posted 1999-11-18 09:36 AM


Abandonment comes in many forms.

DB sad.

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And if the band you're in starts playin' different tunes,
I'll see you on the dark side of the moon.
==P. Floyd==

Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
3 posted 1999-11-19 02:27 AM


Story of my childhood, Deverone. This one hit home.

Michael

Deverone
Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 136
San Antonio, Tx, USA
4 posted 1999-11-19 12:36 PM


Thanks Michael;..... seems like we have had similar experiences with a troubling childhood. it's only taken me about 20 years or so to remember my childhood and what went on.

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Deverone

"We are cups, constantly and quietly being filled. The trick is, knowing how to tip ourselves over and let the beautiful stuff out".

----Ray Bradbury---



JennyLee
Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
5 posted 1999-11-19 02:14 PM


D...no one truly stands alone.....as long as there is but one person to see into that soul! This is truly heartbreaking. Well Penned Dear.


Jennifer

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Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.


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