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OBLIVION Junior Member
since 1999-10-04
Posts 21 |
Those voices Like urgent secrets On winter winds Carry to my ears Rendering me helpless To the onslaught of tears. Must I constantly feel sorry Rather than thrive on strength? What if.. Just what if I am sick Of being the strong one? But I know I'm not the only one Who feels this way. That is comfort alone. Sometimes this dwelling of hope within me Makes me insane with possibilities of rivalry. Is hope my burden or my blessing? I am sure it is both. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
What a first poem to post!! Wonderful stuff, and welcome to Passions, hope to see much more  ------------------ Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing... ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Deep Blue Me Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396By a big lake |
But I know I'm not the only one who feels this way... Nice opener, O! DB ------------------ And if the band you're in starts playin' different tunes, I'll see you on the dark side of the moon. ==P. Floyd== |
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FreeByrd Member
since 1999-11-03
Posts 267 |
Encore.. Encore... Welcome O -RS ------------------ |
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Yoin Junior Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 29 |
Hope is a hard road but the most important for a weary traveler. Great poem. I loved it Yoin |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
I relate to this so well. I questioned the voices for a time and they abandoned me. Indeed, the burdeon is a blessing. Never question that. michael |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Just what if I'm sick of being the strong one? Ahhhhh yes so astute are you!! Jenny ------------------ Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
Oh, your certainly not alone in this, i can relate very well. The last lines had so much wisdom in them......great work. ------------------ Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices. |
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