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eegood
Junior Member

since 1999-11-16

Posts 41
Chicago,IL

0 posted 1999-11-17 06:18 PM

In the lonely shadows I stand
and wait with silent patience,
and thought I want to reach out
I watch my love sleep quietly.
And as the night becomes the day
my eyes are tired and weary;
but I insist on watching and
waiting for love to awaken,
The eyes of love have now opened
and deep inside I look,
I search for the light
that once burned bright
shining forth with utter beauty.
My heart heart yearns to embrace your love
that is perfectly made for two
and as I am consumed by our passion
your soul becomes my consolation.
I gently entwine your hand in mine
and hold your love to me
we rise upon love's gossamer wings
and fly into the sun.

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

1 posted 1999-11-17 07:50 PM

Absolutely beautiful!! LOVE the waiting for love to awaken line (SIGH) Well done!

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Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

Systematic Decay
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

2 posted 1999-11-17 09:23 PM

Yes, this is indeed very beautiful....I love it.

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Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices.

Deverone
Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 136
San Antonio, Tx, USA

3 posted 1999-11-18 01:59 AM

I think you may have gotten pretty close to capturing Love at its best.....very beautiful indeed!!

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Deverone

"We are cups, constantly and quietly being filled. The trick is, knowing how to tip ourselves over and let the beautiful stuff out".

----Ray Bradbury---

Deep Blue Me
Member

since 1999-11-04

Posts 396
By a big lake

4 posted 1999-11-18 09:33 AM

Beautifully written!

DB

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And if the band you're in starts playin' different tunes,
I'll see you on the dark side of the moon.
==P. Floyd==

Michael

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

5 posted 1999-11-19 02:24 AM

Wow...this is tremendous. Very beautiful, indeed.

Michael

mojar
Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 169
granbury, texas, usa

6 posted 1999-11-20 12:05 PM

very nice

JennyLee
Senior Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.

7 posted 1999-11-20 02:43 PM

Like very much !

Jenny

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Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.

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