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mojar
Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 169
granbury, texas, usa

0 posted 1999-11-17 05:35 PM

hello friend,
how are you today.
hope that you are doing well,
that sunshine comes your way.

you seem to be so sad and blue,
it's written on your face.
the stain from all the tears you've cried,
are easily there to trace.

if you would like to talk awhile,
i'll lend to you an ear.
maybe i can comfort you,
your tears we both can share.

if i can take your cares away,
to help relieve your pain.
i would take them all upon my back,
just to see you smile again.

me.

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

1 posted 1999-11-17 05:37 PM

My! You are pumping them out aren't you?? Love this shows me a kind and caring soul and friend!!

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Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

mojar
Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 169
granbury, texas, usa

2 posted 1999-11-17 06:05 PM

since i have started writing again, they just keep coming, my head is so full of them it's mind boggling. i hope you really enjoy reading them as much as i like writing them.

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

3 posted 1999-11-19 01:41 AM

The world could use a lot more friends like you. Nice work.

Michael

JennyLee
Senior Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.

4 posted 1999-11-19 02:50 PM

Excellent verse Mojar
Enjoyed this very much.

Jenny

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Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.

Tammy
Member

since 1999-09-09

Posts 90

5 posted 1999-11-19 04:36 PM

Mo,
Can we be friends??? This poem is truly lovely and speaks of true friendship....
T.

mojar
Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 169
granbury, texas, usa

6 posted 1999-11-19 08:48 PM

all of you fellow poets and balladeers have really made me feel at home here at passions,
this has opened a whole new side of my life. and yes tammy i will be your friend, e-mail me sometime. mo.

Deep Blue Me
Member

since 1999-11-04

Posts 396
By a big lake

7 posted 1999-11-22 04:37 PM

A family that understands each other's pain. A novel approach to relationships and friendships. I'm in.

DB

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