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mojar
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since 1999-11-09
Posts 169
granbury, texas, usa

0 posted 1999-11-17 04:18 PM


the sea reveals it's awesome power,
crested on the waves.
your undertow keeps pulling me down,
my heart to you enslaved.

encompassed by the breaking tide,
thrown upon the beach.
forever longing to be with you,
your heart i try to reach.

me.

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Deep Blue Me
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since 1999-11-04
Posts 396
By a big lake
1 posted 1999-11-17 04:21 PM


forever longing...

forever...

DB

Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
3 posted 1999-11-17 05:41 PM


I too, see the longing, keep reaching

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Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
4 posted 1999-11-19 01:34 AM


I used to go sit at the ocean and just wonder if someone was out there for me.
This poem makes me remember that time of yearn indeed. Good job.

Michael

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