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Isis
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since 1999-09-06
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Sunny Queensland

0 posted 1999-11-15 01:38 AM



Wanting,
Trying,
Sighing,
Crying,
Dying,
Wishing to be understood.


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Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


© Copyright 1999 Isis - All Rights Reserved
Deverone
Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 136
San Antonio, Tx, USA
1 posted 1999-11-15 01:40 AM


right back to you.....I think that is all we want sometimes...just to be understood....even if it is for just a moment or so.

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Deverone

"We are cups, constantly and quietly being filled. The trick is, knowing how to tip ourselves over and let the beautiful stuff out".

----Ray Bradbury---



Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
2 posted 1999-11-15 01:42 AM


Exactly Deverone!!

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Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


JennyLee
Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
3 posted 1999-11-15 06:45 AM


I wish the last line for all of us!
Great Warrior Princess

Jenny Lee

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Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.



[This message has been edited by JennyLee (edited 11-15-1999).]

Deep Blue Me
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since 1999-11-04
Posts 396
By a big lake
4 posted 1999-11-15 08:20 AM


This is a gem, I!

DB

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There's someone in my head,
But it's not me.
==P. Floyd==

Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
5 posted 1999-11-15 11:03 AM


Wow....so much said in six little words. wonderfully done, Isis.

Michael

Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
6 posted 1999-11-15 05:33 PM


Jenny Lee should I change my signature somewhat to Warrior Princess?? Would that be spas? What do you think??
Thanks Michael, and thanks DB too!

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Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


For_Never
Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 125
Cincinnati, oh, United States of America
7 posted 1999-11-16 11:07 PM


The quetion this poem leaves me with is, is it all worth, that single breath, moment to moment, really to much work for it begets?

Thoughtful read

EAB

mojar
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since 1999-11-09
Posts 169
granbury, texas, usa
8 posted 1999-11-17 01:57 PM


this strikes very deep to me. thank you.
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