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Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

0 posted 1999-11-14 08:16 PM



If only he would search through the debris,
And find the real me,
Get to know me once again,
To share in what means much to me.

If only he could look beneath the weeds,
Within the flower garden,
And see the beauty hiding there,
Before my soul does harden.

If only he could see life's treasures,
Share in their beauty and bounty,
See the many faceted diamonds,
Not just put them under lock and key.

If only he could remove the cobwebs,
From around this old soul,
And know the mysteries under there,
And not just take control.

If only he could unravell my secrets,
My fears and my joys,
Share in the wonderment,
Hiding within.


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Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


© Copyright 1999 Isis - All Rights Reserved
suicidal dreams
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since 1999-09-28
Posts 343
Toledo Ohio USA
1 posted 1999-11-14 08:35 PM


beuty within is a great virtue so few have but as I see you have that virtue and hold it tightly to you

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life is short kill quick

Deep Blue Me
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since 1999-11-04
Posts 396
By a big lake
2 posted 1999-11-14 09:57 PM


Isis, Your longing expressed through art
Does break this eager reader's heart

Wonderful words!

DB

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And the men who hold high places
Must be the ones who start
To mold a new reality
Closer to the heart.
===RUSH===


[This message has been edited by Deep Blue Me (edited 11-14-1999).]

Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
3 posted 1999-11-14 11:00 PM


SD I didn't mean to make out I am the goddess herself, don't get me wrong. If I am right in assuming you did?
And DB thanks as always my friend, don't be sad, it's not sympathy I'm after, only understanding.

Deep Blue Me
Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396
By a big lake
4 posted 1999-11-14 11:45 PM


Understood.

DB

Deverone
Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 136
San Antonio, Tx, USA
5 posted 1999-11-15 01:16 AM


Isis.....I Loved reading this one...it makes me feel a little better knowing that someone thinks in the same mindframe of wanting a love or compassion from someone that doesn't seem to understand.



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Deverone

"We are cups, constantly and quietly being filled. The trick is, knowing how to tip ourselves over and let the beautiful stuff out".

----Ray Bradbury---



Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
6 posted 1999-11-15 01:35 AM


You are not alone Deverone, believe me!! Thanks for responding

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Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


Deverone
Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 136
San Antonio, Tx, USA
7 posted 1999-11-15 01:39 AM


Thanks Isis....sorry I've been away for a while...had surgery and lots of other things keeping me away from getting back to all this great writing. BELIEVE me I HAVE missed this place so!!!!

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Deverone

"We are cups, constantly and quietly being filled. The trick is, knowing how to tip ourselves over and let the beautiful stuff out".

----Ray Bradbury---



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