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Winning Equals Nothing, But So Does Loosing
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Winning Equals Nothing, But So Does Loosing |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
I cannot win I never will In this world I'm living in I try But what's the use? They just tell me to try harder. Try harder? Yes, masters I'll try untill my hands are dry And the skin on my feet is blistering. I'll never win When playing this game A game where I do all that you say You make me think that I can win If I only just try a little harder But, no, I won't win I'll only lose the fight That I put up with myself Trying, trying, trying, And never getting anywhere. |
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Deep Blue Me Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396By a big lake |
You've already won, Joy. You can express yourself and that, in itself, is winning. DB ------------------ And the men who hold high places Must be the ones who start To mold a new reality Closer to the heart. ===RUSH=== |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
And neveer getting anywhere...gret work...ejoyed the read  Jenny ------------------ Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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FreeByrd Member
since 1999-11-03
Posts 267 |
You've got the wrong rule book, as I did. Throw it away and use your own, each day you'll get a WIN!!! I believe this one's a WINNER -RS ------------------ |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
"there is no winning, only degrees of losing." I'm not sure where i heard that but that is what this poem made me think of. Good job. Michael |
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