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Come lay with me |
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Tammy Member
since 1999-09-09
Posts 90 |
Come lay with me under the velvet sky on the warm damp grasses of the night Come lay with me and brush your lips to mine ever so softly Come lay with me for my pleasures are many and most untold Come lay with me and view me in all my naked splendor Come lay with me and stroke me gently from head to toe Come lay with me and feel my heart pounding in my breast Come lay with me and settle yourself deep between my thighs Come lay with me and create the rhythms that are sure to make me sigh Come lay with me and sow your seeds deep within my garden Come lay with me and give to me the very essence of your soul. [This message has been edited by Tammy (edited 11-15-1999).] |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
This is absolutely beautiful! I love it! ------------------ Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices. |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Beautuful Honner...first my come drink...now your come lay.....let's both hope we don't get kicked into Adult.LOL....I really love the style you wrote this one! I see you no longer need coaxing to post from me.LOL. Call me when you can  Jenny (Jinkers)  ------------------ Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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Tammy Member
since 1999-09-09
Posts 90 |
SD & Jinkers, Thank you both, I'm glad that you both enjoyed this one.... Jinks, this one was really easy to write took me only like 10 minutes.... T. |
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Deep Blue Me Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396By a big lake |
As the first guy to read this, I must say... WOW!!! WWOOWW!!! T, this is ab-fab! Is this the right Forum? Maybe I clicked the wrong button? LOL What a rush! DB ------------------ Let's swim to the moon Let's climb through the tide Penetrate the evenin' That the city sleeps to hide. ===The Lizard King=== |
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FreeByrd Member
since 1999-11-03
Posts 267 |
Read this a few daze ago, unable to catch my breath and respond.I'm glad I came back to experience it once more. Abounds with passion. Could I beg you for some more. -RS ------------------ |
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mojar Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 169granbury, texas, usa |
from a mans perspective this is truely incredible, wish i had wrote it from the other side. wow. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Passion (sigh). Really liked this piece, thanks for sharing it with us all. ------------------ Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing... ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Tammy Member
since 1999-09-09
Posts 90 |
DB,FB,Mo and Isis, You are all to kind... thank you for your words of praise... I'm glad to have had you all read it... Thank you again. T. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Exquisite piece here, Tammy. I don't know if it's in the right forum D.B. but I'm glad it's here none the less. michael |
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Tammy Member
since 1999-09-09
Posts 90 |
M. Thank you, your words of praise mean alot. T. |
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Deverone Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 136San Antonio, Tx, USA |
Had to make sure I wasn't in the wrong forum....this is great......(still catching my breath)....this is so full of PASSION!! Thank you for sharing. ------------------ Deverone "We are cups, constantly and quietly being filled. The trick is, knowing how to tip ourselves over and let the beautiful stuff out". ----Ray Bradbury--- |
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Tammy Member
since 1999-09-09
Posts 90 |
Dev, Glad that you enjoyed this one... T. |
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FreeByrd Member
since 1999-11-03
Posts 267 |
Sorry, I know I shouldn't do this, but I thought I would just POP this one back up to the top in case someone had missed it and needed some inspiration. -RS ------------------ |
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Spyder New Member
since 1999-11-19
Posts 9 |
That was the most sensuous thing i've read in a long time...it was so beautiful. I felt what you were saying. ~~~~~SpYdeR |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Stunning Tammy...... ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! |
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Tammy Member
since 1999-09-09
Posts 90 |
FreeBryd, Thank you, your sooo sweet.... T. Spyder and Pepper, Thank you, I'm glad that you both enjoyed this one..... T. |
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mojar Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 169granbury, texas, usa |
if only the passion of my life could express herself this way. you are truely gifted to be able to express yourself this way. i wish all people could do it. this has so much in common with a lot of the things in my head. mo. |
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Tammy Member
since 1999-09-09
Posts 90 |
Mo, I'd be very flattered if this piece were to allow you to put to paper just what is in your head.... T. |
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FreeByrd Member
since 1999-11-03
Posts 267 |
In dire need of inspiration today.......... POP ------------------ |
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FreeByrd Member
since 1999-11-03
Posts 267 |
Browsing among the Classics again. In search of some inspiration. |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Tammy, This was beautiful...of course you don't need me to tell you that..it's obvious. So much passion in this...it's stunning. I'm glad they brought it back up to the top or else I would have missed it. Maharet  < !signature-->"They can take away my belongings. They can beat me. They can torchure me and they can kill me. Then they will have my dead body. But they will not have my obedience." -Gandhi ~*Angel of Darkness*~ [This message has been edited by Dark Enchantress (edited 01-18-2000).] |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Tammy, This was beautiful...of course you don't need me to tell you that..it's obvious. So much passion in this...it's stunning. I'm glad they brought it back up to the top or else I would have missed it. Maharet < !signature-->"They can take away my belongings. They can beat me. They can torchure me and they can kill me. Then they will have my dead body. But they will not have my obedience." -Gandhi ~*Angel of Darkness*~ [This message has been edited by Dark Enchantress (edited 01-18-2000).] |
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ARCADIA Junior Member
since 2000-01-12
Posts 23 |
BEAUTIFUL, I ABSOLUTLEY LOVED IT!!! IT GAVE ME CHILLS! WELL DONE |
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Bojopy Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391 |
Tammy- I dont think I would be a man if I did not respond to this! It was tender and at the same time appealing. Way to go on this one!!!!! "Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy) |
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Poetic Sadness Junior Member
since 2000-01-15
Posts 12Kelowna, BC, Canada |
Your words were soul-penetrating, struck me right in the right places. I wish I could write this sort of passion as exquisitely and perfectly as you can. I'm envious! Congrats. Love Heather M. The things you fear are undefeatable not by their nature, but by your approach. -Jewel |
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