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Bonedaddy Junior Member
since 1999-11-11
Posts 14Columbus NJ |
Darkness surrounds me. Always has. i don't know where it goes. don't think i ever will. Occasionally i swim through it and try to find the peace, happiness, and understanding that others talk so easily about. instead i find things that confuse me even more. some are beautiful. some are not. they always lead me back to the same place. the place i shall forever call home... My eternal darkness.... |
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Deep Blue Me Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396By a big lake |
Some are beautiful Some are not... Nice. I like this. DB ------------------ Let's swim to the moon Let's climb through the tide Penetrate the evenin' That the city sleeps to hide. ===The Lizard King=== |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Like this much.... Jenny Lee  ------------------ Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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FreeByrd Member
since 1999-11-03
Posts 267 |
Bone, continue the journey, some never take the trip. Life is intense, Cherish it. For those who speak so easily of understanding. I question if they really do. Swim on my friend, understanding comes. -RS |
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Yoin Junior Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 29 |
I like this. very plain spoken but still poetic. great Yoin |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
"My own Personal Darkness"...very powerful line there. Great poem. michael |
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