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Dark Poetry #1

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Bonedaddy
Junior Member

since 1999-11-11

Posts 14
Columbus NJ

0 posted 1999-11-12 09:32 PM

Angels, or so i am told
have the ability to travel between
heaven and earth.
why is it then that i am blessed with wings to carry me,
while my arms are bonded with the ground...
is this some cruel joke?...

JennyLee
Senior Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.

1 posted 1999-11-13 07:10 AM

I really like your prespective on this piece...nice work

Jenny

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Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.

[This message has been edited by JennyLee (edited 11-13-1999).]

Systematic Decay
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

2 posted 1999-11-13 11:07 AM

Ahhh, I can relate to this feeling; nice work, short and sweet.

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Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices.

FreeByrd
Member

since 1999-11-03

Posts 267

3 posted 1999-11-14 12:41 PM

I'm told all things are Right in Heaven.

Could it be your lot to make it Right on Earth?

Wonderful piece

-RS

Michael

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

4 posted 1999-11-15 10:32 AM

Indeed, it would seem so at itmes. i can certainly relate to this one. Good job.

Michael

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