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Amy J. Renz
Junior Member

since 1999-11-06

Posts 26
Newark, NJ, USA

0 posted 1999-11-12 05:58 PM

Familiar faces cloud my mind,
that I have never knew.
I sit and ponder for a time,
and wonder where time flew.
That little boy who was my friend,
we used to laugh and play.
The changes in him never end,
he's changed in every way.
I sit and ponder this one thought,
and sit an think awhile.
But in your eyes I am caught,
and in that subtle smile.
Re veals the boy that I once knew,
which makes my thoughts all wrong.
Because the time had never flew,
he's been here all along.

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I am an acquired taste, I'm anchovies. Not everyone likes those hairy little things.
Tori Amos

Deep Blue Me
Member

since 1999-11-04

Posts 396
By a big lake

1 posted 1999-11-12 06:06 PM

You can't take the boy out of the man.
Very nice, A.

DB

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Let's swim to the moon
Let's climb through the tide
Penetrate the evenin'
That the city sleeps to hide.
===The Lizard King===

Bonedaddy
Junior Member

since 1999-11-11

Posts 14
Columbus NJ

2 posted 1999-11-12 09:28 PM

Amy,
i really like this alot as i have with all of your poetry that i have been so lucky to listen to. You have a great gift...dont ever stop.and i love you too

JennyLee
Senior Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.

3 posted 1999-11-13 07:43 AM

Enjoyed the read!

Jenny Lee

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Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.

Systematic Decay
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

4 posted 1999-11-13 11:06 AM

Very nice poem.

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Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices.

FreeByrd
Member

since 1999-11-03

Posts 267

5 posted 1999-11-14 12:45 PM

Some consider anchovies a delicacy. I'm acquiring a taste.

Beautiful work.

-RS

Michael

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

6 posted 1999-11-15 10:38 AM

Enjoyable poem, Amy. Something to ponder, indeed. Great ending.

Michael

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

7 posted 1999-11-16 05:58 PM

There is always a little boy in every man, he surfaces occasionally. Beautiful job

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Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

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