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Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

0 posted 1999-11-12 05:54 PM

Spinning through time and space,
Lost in words,
Lost in voice,
And in meanings..

I'm just an orb,
Floating through the galaxies of emotions,
Learning, living, dying,
Does anyone have the fabled curing potion?

Each day a new challenge,
Each day something awaits discovery,
Each day my soul sings various refrains,
I have mastered the skill of puppetry.

I've found my voice,
The strong, sure tones of a poet,
The baying of great hounds,
Thank God I get to show it.

To exorcise my demons,
Therapy for the soul,
If I don't have the medication
The sweet desperation will take it's toll.

We are all just Orbs in growing space,
Moving through various constellations,
At least it seems I've found my place,
No more an echoing voice in the wilderness.

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Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

Deep Blue Me
Member

since 1999-11-04

Posts 396
By a big lake

1 posted 1999-11-12 06:05 PM

I for one am glad to have your voice here,L.

This was very nice.

DB

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Let's swim to the moon
Let's climb through the tide
Penetrate the evenin'
That the city sleeps to hide.
===The Lizard King===

Systematic Decay
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

2 posted 1999-11-12 11:34 PM

Isis, I like the way the imagery switches from heavenly things to earthly things, and back again. nice job.

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Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices.

JennyLee
Senior Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.

3 posted 1999-11-13 07:18 AM

I agree with Amy...I really like the style!!!

Another good one my friend

Jenny Lee

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Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

4 posted 1999-11-13 05:57 PM

Thanks

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Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

mojar
Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 169
granbury, texas, usa

5 posted 1999-11-14 04:08 PM

I LIKE.

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

6 posted 1999-11-14 05:48 PM

Thanks Mojar, and I haven't gotten to welcome you yet, so welcome to Passions

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Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

suicidal dreams
Member

since 1999-09-28

Posts 343
Toledo Ohio USA

7 posted 1999-11-14 08:49 PM

Amy had the right idea so ditto.
but she forgot one thing and thats that this poem is truly truly beutiful.

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life is short kill quick

mojar
Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 169
granbury, texas, usa

8 posted 1999-11-19 08:55 PM

isis i keep going back and reading this, and each time it send chills up my spine, this is just the most awesome wording, i agree with your perception.

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

9 posted 1999-11-19 10:23 PM

So glad you like it that much Mojar

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Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

Alwye

Moderator

Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

10 posted 1999-11-19 11:38 PM

OOh Isis....this is wonderful...I read it several times and found myself loving it more each time..it too gave me chills...awesome work.

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*Krista Knutson*

"To be great is to be misunderstood...." - Ralph Waldo Emerson

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