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Dark Poetry #1

Some other time

FreeByrd
Member

since 1999-11-03

Posts 267

0 posted 1999-11-12 04:42 PM

Hills and winding streets
Towers and pyramids
Prostitutes and Politicians
Indians have claimed the Rock

The cable brings me home again
Visitors pay the fair
Wealthy in experience
The toast, the broken glass

Journey to the mountains
In time it's up in smoke
Suicidal
Too weak to die

Hesitant to leave
No strength to stay
The inmates running
Living day to day

The search
Still wanted
The healing takes some time
Home again, the asylum far behind

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Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

1 posted 1999-11-12 05:41 PM

I've been there!! Loved this one

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Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

Deep Blue Me
Member

since 1999-11-04

Posts 396
By a big lake

2 posted 1999-11-12 06:03 PM

Stayed in an apartment in Sausalito for a while. Almost had a grabber walking up Lombard St.

Beautiful town, Byrd!

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Let's swim to the moon
Let's climb through the tide
Penetrate the evenin'
That the city sleeps to hide.
===The Lizard King===

JennyLee
Senior Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.

3 posted 1999-11-13 07:21 AM

Bravo !!!

Jenny Lee

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Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

4 posted 1999-11-15 09:48 AM

I'd just assume be in the asylum at this point...good poem none the less. Enjoyable read, Free Byrd.

Michael

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