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Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

0 posted 1999-11-12 12:06 PM



Always the warrior princess,
I endlessly battle on,
Battling for my soul or friendships,
So many sadly gone.

Do I love too much?
Do I care too hard?
I seem to frightened people away,
I always draw the wrong card.

Perhaps this IS what is meant for me,
Letdown after letdown?
Any trying only makes things worse,
The permanent facial expressions a frown?

My soul may be becoming a burden,
A cross too hard to carry,
My sins are seeming to revisit me,
I can't help it that I worry.

I feel alone,
Like the clown in the circus,
A skimming stone,
With a heart of pus.



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Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


© Copyright 1999 Isis - All Rights Reserved
JennyLee
Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
1 posted 1999-11-12 08:58 AM


Love it Warrior Princess !


Jenny Lee

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Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.


Deep Blue Me
Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396
By a big lake
2 posted 1999-11-12 09:10 AM


Clown images are very frightening for me. I must have had a bad time at the circus.

You continue to appeal to my thought processes.

Nice work.

DB

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Let's swim to the moon
Let's climb through the tide
Penetrate the evenin'
That the city sleeps to hide.
===The Lizard King===

FreeByrd
Member
since 1999-11-03
Posts 267

3 posted 1999-11-12 10:43 AM


Uncommon Strength

Let the battle rage on

This BUDS for you

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
4 posted 1999-11-12 05:40 PM


Deep Blue I will DIE if you are a Jim Morrison fan half as much as I am!! A wonderfully intelligent man. Glad you like the old thought processes.
Thanks Jenny Lee, perhaps I should change my signature to warrior Princess?
Thanks FreeByrd and let me say Welcome to passions!!

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Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


Deep Blue Me
Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396
By a big lake
5 posted 1999-11-12 06:11 PM


Honey, you better get a knife!

DB

5 to 1
1 in 5
No one here gets out alive
You get yours, baby.
I'll get mine
===MOJO===

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