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Dark Enchantress
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since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258
meet Morgana

0 posted 1999-11-11 10:24 PM


Note:It happend again just yesterday (on of my little trips) so once again it may seem more like ramble than poetry.

Every which way
battered and torn
Hair pulled and tangled
Tears mixed in with shattered cries
Breath too quick
to be of typical nature
Mind too gone
to ever be restored
Whether worse or better,
I'm not sure
But when I look into the mirror
Who do I see?
Who is in there!!!!!
Who's eyes do I see!!!
Mirror reply or be broken
And even though I could not explain
She doesn't care
Damn it all
For the sake of the world,
burry me deep
Gone and away
Forever there to stay
And as I go to clean myself up...
- a vision!
A blade sliding across my wrist
To the ground she falls
crying out, "NO!!!"
I can't go
I can't
I WON'T let it happen!
NO!
In fear of taking a shower
for the fact that I may lose control
and carry out my foreseen fate
In fear of leaving my room,
for the fact that I want
NO ONE TO SEE ME
Don't look!
The eyes will surely burn
from a sight such as this
Surely you will scream
and with terror filled eyes run away
I'll gather my strength and fight for control
Although still I feel fragile and meek
My head aching
My hands unstable
My nose running
My tears hot against my flesh
My body shivering,
from the inside out
With deep breaths,
she'll relax a little
and sleep will come

© Copyright 1999 Morgana - All Rights Reserved
Systematic Decay
Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........
1 posted 1999-11-11 10:46 PM


Wow, I really like this, especially the line: "Mirror reply or be broken"

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Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices.



JennyLee
Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
2 posted 1999-11-11 11:27 PM


I will gather my strength and fight for control...so powerful D.E. It didn't ramble at all


Jenny Lee

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Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.


Deep Blue Me
Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396
By a big lake
3 posted 1999-11-11 11:59 PM


strength is in you DE, much strength.

DB

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
4 posted 1999-11-12 12:13 PM


You have more strength in you than I could ever hope for. Bravo!!

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Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


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