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The True World |
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Bonedaddy Junior Member
since 1999-11-11
Posts 14Columbus NJ |
He is gone... He will never return... He promised me all theworlds knowledge... If i just sat in his place while he stretched his legs... This was many years ago... Now i realize my simple gesture of grace was the cruel pawn of a greedy soul... The old man is not to return... It was never his intention... Now i am the old man... From my place high above I have seen everything this pitiful world has to offer. He did keep his promise...I now know all but iam a mere prisoner. I, like the old man before me am bound to this hellish seat by my promise not to move until his return. Now i wait for the next kind soul to ascend this peak. so that i too, may stretch my legs. |
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Deep Blue Me Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396By a big lake |
This is cool. I'd rather stand when you look at it like that. DB |
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Amy J. Renz Junior Member
since 1999-11-06
Posts 26Newark, NJ, USA |
BD, this is my favorite one of yours. It reminds me of the story of Atlas, holding up the world. I love you. |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Vivid imagery here  Enjoyed this piece. Jenny Lee ------------------ Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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