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Bonedaddy
Junior Member
since 1999-11-11
Posts 14
Columbus NJ

0 posted 1999-11-11 02:44 PM


Nobody understands
Nobody tries
instead they pass judgement as one.
i am not like them.
our minds are not the same.
They dont understand yet they are so quick to
strike the match
cut the rope
pull the trigger
throw the switch
or push the needle


© Copyright 1999 Bonedaddy - All Rights Reserved
Deep Blue Me
Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396
By a big lake
1 posted 1999-11-11 03:02 PM


The last four lines are killer, Bone

DB

FreeByrd
Member
since 1999-11-03
Posts 267

2 posted 1999-11-11 03:04 PM


Ditto...............
Amy J. Renz
Junior Member
since 1999-11-06
Posts 26
Newark, NJ, USA
3 posted 1999-11-11 05:26 PM


I am still waiting for the animated version BD. I love you!
JennyLee
Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
4 posted 1999-11-11 06:03 PM


Well Done
They don't understand, yet they are so quick to strike the match...cuts right to the core!!


Jenny Lee


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Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.


Systematic Decay
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since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........
5 posted 1999-11-11 09:33 PM


Very nice.....Welcome to Passions!

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Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices.



Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
6 posted 1999-11-12 03:59 AM


INDEED!
Very well said.


Michael

Yoin
Junior Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 29

7 posted 1999-11-12 02:55 PM


oh buddy! I liked it
good work Bonedaddy

JOY 14
Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA
8 posted 1999-11-13 01:41 PM


Exactly! I know I feel the same way. People always making asumptions before they even know...
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