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Bonedaddy
Junior Member
since 1999-11-11
Posts 14
Columbus NJ

0 posted 1999-11-11 02:38 PM


This is my life...
i am a mere puppet of others desires.
my whole life run and ruined by those
i loathe...no those i hate.
i always tell myself that i will someday slay these tyrants and emerge a new person. One that i, myself can relate to.
But they are too strong. too many.
there is now only one way out.
though it is not the answer it is the solution.
The icy fingers of the man they call Death run across my face. This gentle stranger contains no bias. He will take me to a better place. Or so i think......
i am wrong



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Deep Blue Me
Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396
By a big lake
1 posted 1999-11-11 03:01 PM


Nice work, B.

Welcome to the forum.

DB

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"So we beat on, boats against the current, borne back ceaselessly into the past."
----The Great Gatsby----
==F. Scott Fitzgerald==

FreeByrd
Member
since 1999-11-03
Posts 267

2 posted 1999-11-11 03:09 PM


There's a big world out there Bone

Get lost in it

Make it your own

Real nice work! ! !

-RS

Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
3 posted 1999-11-11 03:40 PM


many of us long for Death, but really don't know that the next world will be better...maybe we should just make the best of this one. Good poem, welcome to Dark Passions.


Michael

Amy J. Renz
Junior Member
since 1999-11-06
Posts 26
Newark, NJ, USA
4 posted 1999-11-11 04:32 PM


Nice work Bonedaddy. Your poems are wonderful, as are you. I love you lots.
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