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Dark Poetry #1

Regretful Death

wolfie97
Member

since 1999-10-18

Posts 58
Newcastle, WY USA

0 posted 1999-11-11 09:45 AM

Where are you taking me?
(no reply)
Somewhere beautiful by the sea?
(no reply)
Why am I here; where is here?
(still no reply)
Is this real, or just a dream?
Or is it real within a dream?
Maybe a dream inside reality.
Please tell me sir.
Yes, sir, I know I am not alone.
Except, who are you I am with?
Please answer me.
No, I don't remember, know what?
Will you get me back soon,
For my loving wife,
And beautiful daughter are waiting
for me.
No, I can't wait, I can't be late.
What do you mean?
This can't be true!
I'm too young to fall unto you.
Let go, I insist, release me now!
Face me coward, why do you shunn
from my face?
Look at me.

With eyes gaunt and black,
His face boney and white.
He replies with a staff, a sithe.
Larger than life, or well, Death
itself.
Lunging forward, sclicing my soul.
Killing the dead, I now hear
Only eternal silence.
Never again to see a smile.
Never another chance to live,
To truely live. My grave mistake.
That is regret, and no other.

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Stable, opaque, immortal–all by dint
Of the dear names that lie concealed within't.
==EAP== "An Enigma"

Deep Blue Me
Member

since 1999-11-04

Posts 396
By a big lake

1 posted 1999-11-11 11:51 AM

Wolf,
I like the change from conversing to describing, it makes this very fun to read.

DB

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"So we beat on, boats against the current, borne back ceaselessly into the past."
----The Great Gatsby----
==F. Scott Fitzgerald==

JennyLee
Senior Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.

2 posted 1999-11-11 02:19 PM

I agree with DB, a wonderful read

Jenny Lee

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Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.

Michael

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

3 posted 1999-11-11 03:36 PM

A nice long walk...never to return Good work, wolf.....a very enjoyable read.

Michael

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