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Deep Blue Me Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396By a big lake |
Inspired by, and written for a sick friend. Her face grows still sweeter as years drift on Love becomes deeper, Mem'ries more fond A balance for tears, in my dreams I have found And a lack of a true love, truly abounds The light we were sharing is now dark and cold Except in my mind's eye, where it still burns so bold My heart beats so hungry, my bloodflow all spent To keep fresh this lost love, from dreams to me sent Her figure perfection, flesh milky-white And deep-sea green eyes that capture all light Sweet auburn tresses caressing my face When locked in her precious frame's warm embrace Now she is gone, and try as I might To share her forever, I must die tonight. For You CT, Get well soon. DB ------------------ "So we beat on, boats against the current, borne back ceaselessly into the past." ----The Great Gatsby---- ==F. Scott Fitzgerald== [This message has been edited by Deep Blue Me (edited 11-16-1999).] |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Sweet!! Wish someone loved me that much!!  ------------------ Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing... ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Well done! Got your Email...it's not you. ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Beautiful David  Like very much...so thoughtful. Jenny Lee  ------------------ Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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wolfie97 Member
since 1999-10-18
Posts 58Newcastle, WY USA |
Wow, that is all I have to say, wow! Very caring poem. I like it. ------------------ Garrett 'sneaky' Gall |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
A tinge of the Romeo and Juliet concept. To love someone enough to die for them is powerful, indeed. Nice touch. Michael |
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Tammy Member
since 1999-09-09
Posts 90 |
Beautiful, Thats all I can say is simply beautiful.... T. |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
Very beautiful.....I hope your friend recovers ------------------ Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices. |
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suicidal dreams Member
since 1999-09-28
Posts 343Toledo Ohio USA |
So sad to hear your friend is doing bad if not bad then in this condition I hope she gets better and lives on forever. ------------------ life is short kill quick |
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Deep Blue Me Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396By a big lake |
Thank you all for taking time to read and respond. Isis- YOU are sweet. Watcher- I will miss you if you go JennyLee- I can't say enough Wolf- Your stuff astounds me M- It means a lot, coming from you T- I love your work, I wish for more Sys- Your scope is frightening for one so tender sd(Tom)- I mightily enjoy your words, my friend. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Thanks DB (HUGS) ------------------ Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing... ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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