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wolfie97
Member
since 1999-10-18
Posts 58
Newcastle, WY USA

0 posted 1999-11-10 03:18 PM



Loosing it now
My link to the outside
Forever blinded by my Rage.
Growing numb to things of beauty.
I am deaf to things that matter.
I can only hear my mind's song.
The voices hear me within.
To control, manipulate,
Disbeliefe in all.
I hate it all.
I hate myself,
But love myselfe.
Or at least the safety
Of my comforting mind or mindless.
Around and around I go so high.
Faster in this natural bliss.
Lost in insanity, blinded,
Blinded by the world.
My heart beats
Faster and
Faster
Which is real?
What is mislead?
How can I tell when is not?
I am confused, alone, in a crowd
For my mind is always shut off.
At the same time, I pulse
With questions of sanety,
Questions of reality.
Gone, gone am I
But remain
here.
When is this
Dreaded rollercoaster
Ride of mental state
of weirdism
over?
Stop!
Stop now!
I insist, please!
Please slow
My mind.
slow,
now,
ok,
Better.
But wait, why?
Not again!
Oh, someone please help.
Here they come crashing down on me
The birds, the bells, the sea.
Stop the noise inside.
Silence me
I beg
Let them speak,
As a great man once said,
Nevermore!

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Garrett 'sneaky' Gall

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Deep Blue Me
Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396
By a big lake
1 posted 1999-11-10 04:57 PM


G, I love this, it's so twisted and sticking out all over like a hedgehog all rolled up and scared. Way cool, my friend.

DB

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Tongue-tied and twisted
Just an Earthbound misfit...
P. Floyd

JennyLee
Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
2 posted 1999-11-11 08:35 AM


Faster in this natural bliss...
Liked the read

Jenny Lee

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Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.

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